My 1st Comic attempt

Me and a few friends from my multimedia course have been trying to create a comic, but to start, we all have made our own, so here is my 1st attempt:

Black and White link: http://luckypigeon.dpsweb.org/wp-content/uploads/2007/09/lucky-pigeon-no-colour.jpg

Colour Link: http://luckypigeon.dpsweb.org/wp-content/uploads/2007/09/lucky-pigeon-coloured.jpg

If you want to see the other comics, go to: http://luckypigeon.dpsweb.org/